Beginning writers
repeatedly encounter the advice, “Write what you know.” Of course, if writers
heeded this counsel narrowly and reported only what they have directly
experienced, historical fiction and fantasy tales would vanish along with the best
of the world’s literature.
After all, Jamie McGuire
is not an alpha male and should not be privy to the secret emotions of her
tattooed bad boy (Beautiful Disaster);
Arthur Golden is not a Japanese woman and should not have given us his intimate
portrait of “the floating world” (Memoirs
of a Geisha); and Stephen Crane, who never fought on a Civil War
battlefield, should not have penned his tale of cowardice and heroism—acclaimed
for its realism (The Red Badge of Courage).
Furthermore, “Write what
you know” might even be bad advice. Fiction by students in MFA writing programs
is notoriously autobiographical or even narcissistic, starring penniless grad
students awkwardly exploring their sexuality and the meaning of adult life.
So let’s take a closer
look at the truism, “Write what you know.”
To begin, what do you know? Well, you know yourself.
And you are already a complex of selves. You play plenty of roles in the daily
theater of your life, such as daughter, sister, friend, lover, worker, soccer
mom. But are you not also the 8-year-old who wanted to be a cowgirl, the high
school bookworm who hung out with the misfits, the college sophomore who read
Sylva Plath, the woman who fantasizes what it would be like to spend a weekend
in Paris with that hunky guy in line for a latte? Without being overtly nuts,
you manage to include all these characters,
like the population of a small town. A Jungian psychologist would say you contain
everyone you have ever been, as well as everyone you have tried to be. You are,
in this sense, even the person you avoided becoming or the one you are scared
of being. All of these characters are “you”—and you know them intimately.
Secondly, the idea “to
know” takes on broader meaning when you consider that you “know” in wide-ranging
ways. You know in your head, through education; you know in your body, through
living; you know in your heart, through empathy. You know how people walk and
talk and laugh and interact because you are a seasoned people watcher and
eavesdropper (and, if not, please take up those vices).
To know is a matter of
paying attention. Being the kind of observer who misses nothing is an essential
habit for writers. A person might sleepwalk through life, and having lived for
ten years in Istanbul, be unable to offer a vivid description of the unique sights,
sounds, smells, tastes, and textures of the ancient Turkish city, while a more perceptive
person could visit the city for a week and then write a scene that makes you
feel as if you are standing under the car-sized stones of the Roman aqueduct.
Research is another valid
way of knowing. You can convincingly place a scene within a detailed setting
that you have never even visited—let’s again say Istanbul—but you must first familiarize
yourself with Istanbul through its history and culture, economics, statistics,
street maps, photos, travel and restaurant and night life guides, and nature
guides.
Of course, research has
its limits. I once began writing a novel about a woman who flew a Mustang in
the Reno Air Races. I did my research, including studying a mechanical manual and
building a large-scale model of the Mustang. But it finally came down to this: I
am not a pilot. A few chapters into the story, I realized it was not going to feel
authentic. The project is on hold (at least until I can get out to Reno and
actually ride with a pilot in an air race).
What my story would have
lacked is the sense of immediacy revealed by little details that only experts
know. Every sport and occupation, from ice skating to brain surgery, has these bits
of arcana, beginning with a peculiar jargon. If you conduct interviews as part
of your research (always recommended), ask your sources to provide you with
these revealing particulars: “Please take a moment to think of something
special you know about [skydiving, bronco riding, performing a C-section] that
the rest of us couldn’t even begin to guess.”
So “Write what you know” remains
good advice when it is not interpreted narrowly. Mine the deep strata of what
you already know and what you can learn. And if you are an expert in a
particular field, consider how you might exploit your hard-won knowledge in
your fiction.